Cinder Rose
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Post by Cinder Rose on Nov 2, 2013 0:03:36 GMT -6
Cinder Rose
Basics
Name: Cinder Katrina Rose Nickname: Cindy Age: 15 Birthday: 12 of November Gender: Female Occupation: None Species: Fox Hybrid Powers: Elemental power: Cinder can control, see, hear and understand the light element, this also means she can basically see the light in others souls and control it. Translation & mimicry: Cinder can translate anything language including animal. She can also mimic it so that they too can understand her. Her other elemental powers are water and nature!
Appearance
Hair Color: Ginger Eye Color: Amber Scars: N/A Tattoos: N/A Piercings: N/A Accessories: Chains and a collar(no longer wears these) Full Appearance: Cinder is a skinny teenager of average hight. She has waist-length ginger hair accompanied by the ears and tail of a fox. She often wears a white dress which she washes using her elemental powers.
Persona
Likes: Elements - she loves controlling and understanding them. Stars - anything that sparkles catches her interest. Music - though this is strange to her, she does love the sound of it, she loves to listen to the rhythm and lyrics and often sings along. Dislikes: Dogs - her ears are sensitive so their barking hurts. Fire - though she can control it, its hard to control and often sparks unexpectedly out her or goes out, its overly frustrating. Cars - often thinking like a fox she's afraid they may run her over. Habits: Sneaks into peoples gardens, pretending to be a fox. Fears: Her father - she is afraid that her father may come back. GCMR - they watch her, and she is afraid they may take her in and imprison her in their base. Secrets: None Hobbies: Meddling - she loves to meddle with the elements and people along with other creatures. Traits: Sweet, loving, playful, curious and mischievous
People/Past
Family: Casandra Lian Rose(Casey)=mother - Sweet and loving, always willing to help out. Duke Renee Williams=father - angry and dangerous, always trying to teach his daughters the lesson he learned as a kid; don't mess with your father. Natalia Sophia Rose(Nat)=sister - playful and caring, a lot like mother and sister Casey and Cindy. Pets: N/A Friends: N/A Crushes: N/A Enemies: N/A History: Casey and Duke, two fox hybrids met in the forest. Duke had been charming and friendly back then, and that's why Casey had fallen for him. Casey had been 17 back then, Duke at the age of 18. Duke had visited Casey in the woods for a while until Casey bought an apartment and Duke moved in with her. At the age of 20 Casey had twin sisters Nat and Cindy. Duke had hated the two children and had almost killed them. GCMR had come and taken him away, but Casey and her daughters were still afraid that he would escape.
Five years had passed since Duke left and Casey was a mess. One day the girls heard her and her new boyfriend Maurice fighting the a car pulling out. The girls had ran downstairs to see their mother crying at the table. She had yelled at the girls to leave so they had fled, no knowing where to go. Of course, they were only 5, but being fox hybrids they had slight survival instincts of a fox and had soon found a new home.
at the age of 13 the girls were found. They had thought it was the GCMR that had come to take them away, but instead the man had just told them that their mother was dead and had taken them to the graveyard. Many people offered the girls a home, but they had refused and returned to their elemental home on the island. Now the girls often sneak off the island. It was discovered that Nat has invisibility and translation, but no mimicry or elemental powers.
OOC
OOC Name: Cindy Other Accounts: None RP Sample: (sorry, thought I'd steel a little sample of my RPing from my thread for my character Diamondeyes and my friend's character Pigeonpaw) Her paws skimmed the earth with ease. Her blue eyes filled with tears, blurring her vision. Her long blue/grey tail streamed out behind her. As she raced through the forest, her vision blurred and her mind swirling. She didn't know what to do, she just wanted to run away from everything, from life itself. She wanted to be a kit again, to kill her father before he could kill Star, to never have joined the clan. She wanted it all the go away.
Diamond skidded to a halt by the Treeclan border and flopped down in an open clearing, tears streaming from her eyes and rain piercing her right through to the bone. She took a shuddering breath and opened her mouth to scent the air. Through her desperation she hadn't noticed she had come so close to the border. She tried to get up again, but she was paralyzed somehow. The sky lit up with a fork of lightning and thunder crackled overhead, but she was too depressed to care.
She remembered promising her parents she'd never cry, not even in the worst of fear or depression, but this was neither of those, this was love. She couldn't stand it anymore. She never thought she'd be feeling like this. She lifted her head, wincing as heavy drop pounded onto her eyes. She opened her mouth in a silent yowl, but nothing came out. She lowered her head again and let more tears fall. A single tear fell onto her paw. She leaned down and lapped at it, it tasted salty, but there was something more frightening about it than its flavor. Memories of her past flooded into her mind like a stream that had burst its banks. She saw her father kill her mother. She saw herself yowling for her sister. She saw herself being taken into the clan and given to Sparrowfur. Becoming an apprentice and falling in love with Pigeonpaw. Learning that Cheetahpaw was her sister. Her fight with Pigeonpaw. Her broken leg. Her warrior ceremony. More and more fights with Pigeonpaw. She shook the thoughts away and more tears fell from her eyes.
Raising her head once more she yowled out to Cloudclan, I can't go on! Take me away from this life! she cried, tears still falling and rain still pounding her already sodden pelt. Suddenly she caught the scent of the one she was yowling for, but she didn't care. She kept her blue eyes trained on the heavens above.
The End
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Post by Bandy on Nov 2, 2013 9:43:55 GMT -6
... Element control is WAY to powerful, it is basically op. So please pick one elemental power.
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Cinder Rose
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Post by Cinder Rose on Nov 2, 2013 17:07:27 GMT -6
Okay, toned it down to just light. May I suggest putting a power list so we know what not to have? Oh, I also have nature and water yo! You just may not be able to see it...
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Post by Bandy on Nov 2, 2013 17:46:00 GMT -6
Accepted Don't forget to do your claims. It is necessary because it is small and is classified in Rules and even the Bio. It says Three, each element counts as one, however Translation and Mimicry I will allow to be grouped as one. Also invincibility and anything too powerful aren't allowed.
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